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Crim
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Sundered Weimeriners
Joined: March 16, 2003
Posts: 1336
|  Posted: 2005-04-27 17:58
{Ok, this will be my first actual Fan-Fict for DS..I did make a thing called "When Noobs Screw up!"..So, Here it goes..}
* Current Year {Er.Not to sure what year DS is in right now..}*
The loud cackle of the Intercom came on, and Admiral Himula listened..On it, static..But, a faint voices could be heard " Admir..Ne..Ships..Their attacking!...Lost..ships..". The talking stopped...all threw out the Battle Dreadnought there was silent..Then the intercom snapped to life..Admiral Himula cringed at the sound..Screams, for an entire ship..The crewmen, trying to keep their calm, but they couldnt stop their fear from rising. First Rear Admiral Johnson abord the ST-76 Battle Cruiser 'Freedom' Could be heard..His screams.
Then silence came..The crew of the ST-105 Battle Dreadnought 'Crimson' didnt make a sound..but lowered their head in grief. Admiral Himula placed his hands on the arms of his chair, leaning back.." But how?..This is our homespace..What..What could be there?". Himula's eyes closed for a second and opened as he leaned forwards, looking to the navigators " Set jump course to the last Transmission from the 'Freedom' They could be alive. The navigators nodded " Right away sir". Himula Grabbed the intercom and sighed for a second " Crew of the ST-105 Dreadnought 'Crimson' This is your captain speaking..We have just recieved a transmission from a flag ship..The ST-76 'Freedom'..They have reported an enemy attack, and may be dead..We are going to the position of their last transmission..Prepare all arms for battle."
The ship engaged its Anti-Matter Jump Drive. In a few minutes they where there...Pluto. There wasnt a single ship there..Just debree..Dead boddies, ship parts, and pluto..Well, what was left of pluto. It seemed as if Pluto had been blown apart, only parts of Pluto are now floating in space. Admiral Himula stared for a second, and lowered his head " What the hell...What could have done this?..". The radar opertators stared " Admiral! Three Unknown Ships Two-Thousand Gu away!". The Admiral looked up, and to the Radar Operators " Wich Direction?"..This was followed with a quick response " Dead ahead sir..They seem to be Cruiser Sized.." The Admiral nodded some and turned the intercom on " All stations ready for battle, unknown ships in the area..".
Suddenly, three strange ships appeared ahead..Something never seen before. They looked like gaifens, almost exactly like gaifens..but there was something different..A darker movement..A darker look.. The Radio Operators tried to open an link to the ships, but no reaction.. As the ships neared, they made a traingular Formation and dissapeared. The Admiral stared " K'luth Technology?No..This cant be right..Turn on the ECCM and Scanners now!". The radar operators did as told, but nothing..Sudden whispers came..not from inside..but from outside..It was in a language never heard before, a language of sounds and deep toned groans.
Then, the ships appeared..Each on a different side of the Dreadnought. The Admiral looked to the radar operators, who where shocked. The ships opened fire with six beams on each ship..The Dreadnought made a sick sound, as the armor started to melt away. The beams stopped, but was followed by cannon shots..Some new cannon, causing more damage than regular cannons. The Dreadnought turned some, and quickly opened return fire..It targeted the closest ship. This ship didnt seem to have any armor, and was easily wounded..The Ship turned some, and crashed into the ship next to it. Both ships exploded, creating a massive shockwave.
The final ship turned some..It didnt seem like the others, very slow in its movements..almost like a Dreadnought. It opened fire, going directly towards Admiral Himula and his Dreadnought. Eight cannons, twelve high powered beams, and eight torpedoes slammed into the ships left hull. The navigators managed to turn the Dreadnought in time. There was a gapping whole, near the fuel for the Jump Drive..Wich began to leak out into space. The Dreadnought opened fire on the unknown ship..Wich seemed to reflect some of the cannons..But the beams and torpedoes broke threw the ships armor and hull, causing it to explode. The Jump Drive of the Dreadnought had been depleted, along with engine fuel..The Dreadnought came to a slow stop, and stayed motionless..
{More to come if you like this crap..}
[ This Message was edited by: Crimson {Victory or Death} on 2005-04-27 18:07 ]
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Lawman
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Joined: February 28, 2003
Posts: 276
From: New Jersey
| Posted: 2005-04-27 19:04
Eh/10
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-Stormryder-
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Joined: June 17, 2004
Posts: 35
From: FL
| Posted: 2005-04-27 19:10
I enjoyed it, keep it coming.
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