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Christmas Story part 2 |
Angel Starfox
2nd Rear Admiral
Joined: June 26, 2010
Posts: 21
|  Posted: 2011-11-25 15:12
His nation was falling apart. Heaviness fill his heart of the war of old and the war that goes on forever. Jimmy wrote his story of his mom and dad from his phone. The nation didn't know the Christ brother was in US. The Prophet of God was just a son wanted a home. Christ watch this child full grown wanted a home in war. Mean while the earth was being torn apart by a black hole. Jimmy knowing this he had to die to seal the black hole and free the energy the was stored there. If he didn't when black hole at center of galaxy would tear apart. Feeling alone like a nobody hoping that he hadn't lose his mind. Remembering the word that he spoke had come true. Seening that he was not free because he was poor. No one help him telling him he had no home. Saying to himself "I have noting to lose" "I have lost everything because they don't follow Christ but fight the war. So jimmy will give them pain because that no death. That will the war end
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Doran
Chief Marshal
Galactic Navy
Joined: March 29, 2003
Posts: 4032
From: The Gideon Unit
| Posted: 2011-11-25 17:46
- The fan fiction forum is for fan fiction. not whatever little half-a-paragraph you feel is post-worthy.
- Everything's better in moderation, not excess.
- While im glad you've found jesus christ and accepted him as your lord and savior and clearly have plans to hang with the dude come judgement day, darkspace isnt the right venue for pontification.
- And be cause this IS a lot closer to a RoC violation than you really want it to be, im gonna stop it right here and now. if it becomes necessary, thread deletions will commence, followed by revocation of posting privilages
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