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Oskar von Reuenthal Grand Admiral
Joined: April 30, 2007 Posts: 38 From: Olympus Mons, Mars
| Posted: 2010-05-25 18:14  
post all poetry (nice onses though, none of that suicidal crap) here
Darkened Cigarettes
Alone, in front of the expanse of black,
Light from the side but faith no more,
A moment to ponder before I crack,
And I reach for the pain without a sore.
It eludes me, that devious and sly thought,
Leaving the notion of immense disease,
A smile - receiving the item that I sought,
But it's a lie - I'm brought to my knees.
One, the sender, blinks and turns away,
Finding solace in personal deceptions,
Letting this helpless being cry and stray,
Upon the brink of futile conceptions.
Once - just maybe - there had been the rose,
Impish grins shining to respond in aluminum,
But the heart - it feels what the mind knows,
Sensing pain in edifices and a small crumb.
Falling, now, with no signs of stopping known,
Occasional hints with the facade of light to see,
Snapping and breaking every single bone,
Yet one would see an untouched body.
Light - the purifying source of all knowledge and lies,
Those Mundane objects re-attaching mortal debts,
Here - no, perhaps there, light returns and deeply sighs,
Streaming the curling smoke of darkened cigarettes.
_________________ Xenophon Excelsior, By the grace of God, Sultan of Snark, brother of the Sun and Moon, grandson and vicegerent of God, sovereign of all kingdoms: of Sol, Kaus Borealis, and Tetra, of Dres Kona and Delta Pavonis: king of kings, ruler of all that exists;
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Rebellion Marshal Faster than Light
Joined: June 20, 2009 Posts: 730 From: sol
| Posted: 2010-05-25 18:22  
thats......absoultly beutiful....*cries*
but i think u should get a hobbie like bike ridding or boating or something
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Kanman Grand Admiral Pitch Black
Joined: August 26, 2005 Posts: 1017 From: Virginia, United States
| Posted: 2010-05-25 22:00  
Infinity everlasting.
Infinity neverending.
The measurable compares not to the eternity to come.
DarkSpace forever.
DarkSpace ever present.
DarkSpace. Infinity has just begun.
Effulgent.
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Kenny_Naboo Marshal Pitch Black
Joined: January 11, 2010 Posts: 3823 From: LobsterTown
| Posted: 2010-05-25 22:03  
Alternate way to say Grace (at dinner table)
Rub-a-dub-dub
Thanks for the grub.
Bart Simpson
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Glaceon Fleet Admiral
Joined: January 08, 2010 Posts: 141
| Posted: 2010-05-25 22:30  
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On 2010-05-25 22:03, Kenny_Naboo wrote:
Alternate way to say Grace (at dinner table)
Rub-a-dub-dub
Thanks for the grub.
Bart Simpson
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lol!!
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Kanman Grand Admiral Pitch Black
Joined: August 26, 2005 Posts: 1017 From: Virginia, United States
| Posted: 2010-05-26 15:55  
Did anyone get the Buffy the Vampire Slayer reference in my poem or was it lost on all?
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Borgie Chief Marshal Pitch Black
Joined: August 15, 2005 Posts: 2256 From: close by
| Posted: 2010-05-26 21:57  
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On 2010-05-26 15:55, Kanman wrote:
Did anyone get the Buffy the Vampire Slayer reference in my poem or was it lost on all?
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people still remember that show? hell are any of the actors of that show even still famous?
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Kenny_Naboo Marshal Pitch Black
Joined: January 11, 2010 Posts: 3823 From: LobsterTown
| Posted: 2010-05-26 21:59  
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On 2010-05-26 15:55, Kanman wrote:
Did anyone get the Buffy the Vampire Slayer reference in my poem or was it lost on all?
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people still remember that show? hell are any of the actors of that show even still famous?
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LOL Buffy. I skipped those teen shows even when I was a teenager myself. Too much fluff.
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Fatal Perihelion Chief Marshal Fatal Squadron
Joined: April 15, 2010 Posts: 308
| Posted: 2010-05-26 22:11  
~friendly fire isnt
and sell the kids for food~
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Borgie Chief Marshal Pitch Black
Joined: August 15, 2005 Posts: 2256 From: close by
| Posted: 2010-05-27 07:24  
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On 2010-05-26 21:59, Kenny_Naboo wrote:
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On 2010-05-26 15:55, Kanman wrote:
Did anyone get the Buffy the Vampire Slayer reference in my poem or was it lost on all?
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people still remember that show? hell are any of the actors of that show even still famous?
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LOL Buffy. I skipped those teen shows even when I was a teenager myself. Too much fluff.
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same i never watched any of those shows.
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Little Pet Slinki Admiral
Joined: April 16, 2006 Posts: 836 From: United Kingdom, South West.
| Posted: 2010-05-27 17:40  
There once was a woman from Eeling...
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Oskar von Reuenthal Grand Admiral
Joined: April 30, 2007 Posts: 38 From: Olympus Mons, Mars
| Posted: 2010-05-31 10:26  
And Yet I Die
I see the stars sparkling so bright,
Within the moon kissed sky.
I hear the lark so sweetly sing,
Amidst the morning dawn.
I smell the flower full in bloom,
And see their royal pomp.
And yet some place so deep within,
I'm shrouded and I'm closed.
The brilliance there I can't see,
In mists of misery.
Enshrined inside, unable thus,
To touch the warmth without.
I gaze upon this passion spent,
And yet . . . Inside I die.
_________________ Xenophon Excelsior, By the grace of God, Sultan of Snark, brother of the Sun and Moon, grandson and vicegerent of God, sovereign of all kingdoms: of Sol, Kaus Borealis, and Tetra, of Dres Kona and Delta Pavonis: king of kings, ruler of all that exists;
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