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Sardaukar Admiral Raven Warriors
Joined: October 08, 2002 Posts: 1656
| Posted: 2005-09-14 19:13  
I need to let a little bit of my soul out...
Unrequited
What if your dreams are
So close
you cannot grasp them
So far
you cannot escape them
So amazing
you cannot believe them
So joyful
you cannot love them
What if your dreams are
All you can imagine
All you'll ever need
What if your dreams
Are shattered?
- Jon "Sard" T.
[ This Message was edited by: Sardaukar {C?} on 2005-09-15 21:37 ]
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BackSlash Marshal Galactic Navy
Joined: March 23, 2003 Posts: 11183 From: Bristol, England
| Posted: 2005-09-14 19:31  
Good stuff. I write poems of sorts, although I'm not posting them here...
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JRE Grand Admiral
Joined: August 14, 2003 Posts: 571
| Posted: 2005-09-15 10:51  
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On 2005-09-14 19:31, BackSlash *Jack* wrote:
Good stuff. I write poems of sorts, although I'm not posting them here...
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Dont be scared Jack...
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Sixkiller Marshal Courageous Elite Commandos
Joined: May 11, 2005 Posts: 1786 From: Netherlands
| Posted: 2005-09-15 13:28  
he doest want to get banned again, or perhaps even his post count deleted.
So.....
GO JACK POST IT
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BackSlash Marshal Galactic Navy
Joined: March 23, 2003 Posts: 11183 From: Bristol, England
| Posted: 2005-09-15 13:33  
I'm deffinatly not posting it...
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Quietly confident Admiral
Joined: June 28, 2005 Posts: 215 From: Luna, Sol.
| Posted: 2005-09-15 15:29  
good poem sard, and im same as jack, you guys wouldn't want my poems on here, lol. they scare eve nthe saneist of people.
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Daylight \"The Beginning\" Grand Admiral
Joined: July 24, 2002 Posts: 608 From: Oregon, USA
| Posted: 2005-09-15 15:51  
What sane people...This is DS!
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Sardaukar Admiral Raven Warriors
Joined: October 08, 2002 Posts: 1656
| Posted: 2005-09-15 19:37  
Eh. I wrote this in about minute when I was extremely depressed about something involving a girl... the girl, so to speak. It's brief, but each stanza has a deeper metaphorical meaning when you think about em... It just kind of poured out, I typed it as it came to me in about a minutes time.
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BackSlash Marshal Galactic Navy
Joined: March 23, 2003 Posts: 11183 From: Bristol, England
| Posted: 2005-09-15 21:56  
Hair like gold
Eyes like the sea
Lips shimmer silver
How could this be
I just can't believe
I met someone like you
So full of love
Your words so true
Too perfect for words
Your beauty unmatched
I stare into your eyes
You're the perfect match
How did this happen
So sudden so quick
I'm starting to believe
I'm becoming lovesick
The world could end
Everyone in dispair
Aslong as im with you
I would not care
You're like some angel
Sent from above
Destined to meet
So I can give you my love
I care for you
I wait for your touch
I wrote this to tell you
I love you so much
Written by moi.
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Bobamelius Grand Admiral Galactic Navy
Joined: October 08, 2002 Posts: 2074 From: Ohio
| Posted: 2005-09-15 22:19  
*Boos and throws tomatoes at Jack*
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Ramius Fleet Admiral Agents
Joined: January 12, 2002 Posts: 894 From: Ramius
| Posted: 2005-09-16 09:53  
*throws a brick*
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Ham&Swiss Grand Admiral
Joined: October 12, 2004 Posts: 418 From: 10$ to whoever finds me
| Posted: 2005-09-16 12:15  
nice peom
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Daedalus Bum Marshal
Joined: March 26, 2004 Posts: 86 From: Finland
| Posted: 2005-09-16 12:31  
That poem just was to close to my heart jack :*(
Hehe just kidding xD
But i dont really like poems so much
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Valerius{DK} Grand Admiral
Joined: August 03, 2001 Posts: 595 From: Island of Zealand
| Posted: 2005-09-16 15:40  
I KNEW IT..... you DO love me...
btw, nice ones, both of you
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Abandoned Mind Fleet Admiral
Joined: December 08, 2002 Posts: 130 From: Brattleboro, Vermont
| Posted: 2005-09-16 18:47  
I read this poem on another forum. Just the other day, I liked it then also.
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