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Ship-Of-Fools
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|  Posted: 2006-09-18 09:38
I know this is really bad, but I remember the qoute from highschool, and the pic seemed to match, so I said why not,
[ This Message was edited by: Ship-Of-Fools on 2006-09-18 18:11 ]
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Capt.picard
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| Posted: 2006-09-18 11:17
very good, like the quote best, very fitting 
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Binks
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| Posted: 2006-09-18 18:05
Pretty good, quote and pic really match well, and it's a good quote (though oppenheimer was actually quoting it from something else, can't remember exactly what)
Two suggestions:
1. Fix the link, there's a [/ at the end that stops it from working if you just click on it
2. There's some kind of black box at the bottom, under the text and elsewhere, if you could get rid of that it would look better (shouldn't be much work at all)
Nicely done
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Ship-Of-Fools
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| Posted: 2006-09-18 18:18
battle droid, he was qouting, Shiva, a Hindu God. the reason I used his qoute is because he was supposed to have said it after the first nuclear test, and as this is a Mirv run that I caught on "Observe mode" I thought it was proper..... and it kind of ruins the "emotion " of pic, to have 14 lines of explaining . as for the "Box" I am not seeing it the major flaws in pic are
1 I suck at this
2 I did this in paint, and referr to # 1
3 did u read # 1?
[ This Message was edited by: Ship-Of-Fools on 2006-09-18 18:22 ]
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Alien Mastermind
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| Posted: 2006-09-18 18:33
The quote is grammatically incorrect, which kind of bothers me...
"I have become death, the destroyer of worlds"
or
"I am death, the destroyer of worlds"
would all make much more sense to me. But I am crazy so don't listen to me.
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Ship-Of-Fools
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| Posted: 2006-09-18 18:39
alien, is a direct qoute, I felt the same way when I heard it in 8th grade, but I never found out if it was proper
as I said is direct qoute
I need to know if I should bother to try again, if somthing leaps at me, like this one did Mirv/nuke reference obvious
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Fattierob
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| Posted: 2006-09-18 19:01
can I have the un-edited version of that? I can use lol,photoshop to make it look better.
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buzzcoxss (Artisen Anitomical)
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| Posted: 2006-09-18 19:04
it not bad at all
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Sleepin
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| Posted: 2006-09-18 19:05
Well done sir~
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Fatal Rocko Willis
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| Posted: 2006-09-18 23:22
Looks good.. next time try PS Pro.. you can do it in layers and every layer but the bottom can be translucent so you have just text on top of each layer .. that way there are no missing stars in the the text boxes...
other than that I think you did rather well for the first try...
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| Posted: 2006-12-07 08:10
Keep tryin.......
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BackSlash
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| Posted: 2006-12-07 09:05
That's not the direct quote.
"I am death, the destroyer of worlds", was what was 'said' by Shiva (which is rubbish, because it was said by the inventor of the Atom Bomb).
and OMFG Necro :/
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GothThug {C?}
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| Posted: 2006-12-07 09:22
omg, The Thread Necromancer has returned! ugh
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From: happy land
| Posted: 2006-12-07 10:15
yikes its a zombie thread 
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Light-of-Aurora
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| Posted: 2006-12-07 19:15
*Jumps at the sight of a dead thread*
Dead Thread Necromancy ftw!
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