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GothThug {C?}
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|  Posted: 2006-03-14 17:27
Here it is boys and girls the second story that i have in my mind lol
Prologue: It has been 10 years after the first MIR sitings and attacks, and everyone got their stuff back but the Alliances are sketchy Rogue ICC and UGTO have been bombing on and off for the last several months leaving the planets barren and uninhabitable, However the MIR weapon left several planets Neutral and we begin with chapter 1.
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Chapter 1. The First Siting
GothThug wakes up from a deep sleep in a daze at the events which occurred. He was captured by an ICC Squadron known as Fatal Squadron a deadly killing force known throughout the galaxy 2 weeks ago. He sits on the bridge of his new Missle Cruiser known as the Soul Taker a heavily shielded, heavily armed portside torpedo cruiser modified for only one purpose. "Rear Admiral we're coming out of FTL speed in the Andosia sector" (a sector iradiated with tons of electro magnetic interference from the Subspace Shockwave of the MIR). "Commander Divine Shadow proceed to the nearest planet Andosia Prime, we're gonna scout it out to make sure its leveled if its not we're screwed" "SIR! Visual contact on a freighter moving on an intercept course, its markings are unfamiliar" "Visual!" I say ***moments later*** I say "my god......shields! Shields!" Just then several fighters fired on the soul taker taking out 50% of the forward shielding, Critically injuring 2nd Rear Admiral GothThug but not enough to keep him down, "Helm take us out of here back to CD" ***Engaging Jumpdrive*** (meanwhile back in CD-36 the newly restored Bitosopherous a Line Station is sitting in orbit of Exathra) "Bito" The comm Officer Said "we have an unidentified ship approaching CD its markings match those of the pirates we've heard so much about" "very well" bito said "match its course and speed i want to get to it before the Ugto and Kluth do" Just then a HUGE ship came out of jump 1500 Off the Bitosopherous's Port "what the hell is that!?" bito exclaimed "That sir is a pirate ship" Admiral Coeus Explained "that thing is what nearly took out GothThugs Missle Cruiser with its fighters no less" "very well, get within Ion cannon range i wanna see if we can disable it and examine their computers" ***Meanwhile onboard the missle cruiser starfury the vice admiral was getting ready to return to port when*** "sir" "what is it captain?" "sir, The Soul taker has taken critical damage to its port thruster, do we intercept?" "yes, plot an intercept course and tell its captain we're underway," ***in range of the Soul taker*** "Vice Admiral Kitsune i presume?" GothThug says, He says, "why yes, it is I who might i ask is this?" "It is I GothThug, i got captured by the Fatal Squadron and my CO says you're the best Combat pilot heh" "why yes this is true but im a better bomber but meh you never know" ***meanwhile back in Tau Ceti The Soul taker is undergoing repairs when a raven pilot known as reaper embraces GothThug with open arms and exclaims that he is welcome in the ICC. "my god, the ICC's ships sure do get more awesome as time progresses" "They sure do Goth but just remember im a fleet admiral so if yer CO or XO aint around you take orders from me got it?" "I got it, Anyways i need to run something by yer Leader Lark of Serenity we got another problem that we're about to be Faced with"
To Be Continued
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Bash
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| Posted: 2006-03-14 20:37
hmmmm if CO and XO is not there i'm in charge thanks goth!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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GothThug {C?}
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| Posted: 2006-03-15 15:48
Chapter 2: The Serenity Station comes under attack
2nd rear admiral GothThug and Vice Admiral Kitsune Fly quickly to the Serenity station in tau ceti and to debrief her captain on whats going on "This is The Soul Taker Missle Cruiser on approach Serenity Station may i come for repairs?" "Permission Granted please enter hanger bay 2" ***Meanwhile on the bridge*** "Ma'am, 2nd Rear Admiral GothThug is on his way to the bridge with some critical information you need to hear" "very well, send him to the ready room" ***in the ready room*** "madam serenity, this new threat is more powerful than the MIR, it spawns from a cluster near Andosia prime near a star called Dorans Eye from what i gather this race goes too Neutral planets to Kill, Steal and pillage" "im well aware of this, Grand admiral bito was assassinated shortly after you left his station, we believe it was an ex agent who turned into one of these things" "he will surely be missed" I exclaimed "now" Lark says, "we have to get you back to yer fleet mates, The FS were headed back to Ross 248 To Do some Repairs on a planet that was hit by a crystalline Entitie, dismissed" ***Sounding General Quarters*** "Ma'am, Sensors Indicate 3 Ships coming out of Hypermass Space, They match markings on the ships GothThug encountered" "Red alert!" "all men to their fighters and everyone too battlestations" "Goth!" Kitsune said "we have to head back to our ships" "roger" i say ***In the hanger of Argrea Shipyard***"here we go! Engage the first enemy closest too you" "oh my god, The serenity is taking critical damage to its forward array, defend her" ***The MC launches 2 PCM's at the Dread knocking out its forward armor*** "KILL IT!" ***Dread explodes taking out 10% of the MC's shield*** "my god, thats one powerful explosion moreso than the Ganglia" "sir, the other ships are buggin out, should we follow?" "Negative, let them run we have to go back to serenity station and see if her captains okay" "Im fine GothThug" Serenity says "just get to your fleet"!
to be continued....
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HaVoX
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| Posted: 2006-03-15 15:56
keep em coming, this is what made me want to write one.
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GothThug {C?}
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| Posted: 2006-03-16 02:14
Chapter 3: Invasion Of The Pirates
"we have to long jump to Ross 248, Gofbag is under blockade" Kit says, "rgr, initiating AMJ" Goth says. ***meanwhile in the system*** "sir this is the bridge of the Tyconderoga II We're engaging the enemy i say again we are engaging the enemy" 6 Fighter Squadrons from The Station Tyconderoga 2 launched shooting missles at the enemy transport 2500 GU from the planet gofbag, now gofbag being barely built not just days after the invasion from the MIR was only half done because of this no defenses were up yet. "Attention all FS this is 2nd Rear Admiral GothThug and Kitsune we are enroute to Ross and should be there in 2 minutes" ***fighters launched 2 more sabot rockets Critically damaging the ships engines*** "finish it off" ***Transport Explodes Leaving Tons of Debris*** "Sir, the Soul Reaper is exiting Light speed and is enroute to fight off the scouts and cruisers" "Very well..." Just Then PJ's voice came over the airwaves" Tyconderoga 2, this is Grand Admiral Fatal Command my fleet is enroute" "Thank The Gods, your clan mates already here PJ, GothThug,"Is that so?" "GothThug, Come in" "yes sir?" i oughta give you a promotion son, well done for informing us that there is a new threat" "why thank you, but i cant worry about that now, my ship is taking heavy damage from the Cobalt Guns these things have" "cobalt Guns?" those things are rumored to be highly deadly, do you have active shields and Alblative Armor?" "yes i do, Armors holding but my shields are failing get here so i can pull out and Repair!" ***Scout Launches Phase Shifting Photon Torpedo*** "Phase Shifting Torpedos! oh my god evasive manuvers!!!" ***torpedo hits the engine room*** ***Engine Vents Antimatter Fumes*** "Christ was that was Close" "Sir Engine room reports a fire, and the Antimatter Jumpdrive is leaking plasma, Warpcore breach is imminant. Sir what should we do? "Take us too the Tyconderoga, we need to evacuate this ship" "Sir, The Breach is contained, the fires out and the containment is sealed" "Very good Engine room now Destroy those Scouts!" ***The Rest of the FS Fleet arrives*** "GothThug this is Admiral Bash of the Combat Dreadnaught Relentless, Do you require assistance?" "yes i do" "GothThug This is Fleet Admiral [Raven]Reaper im enroute and should be there onboard the station Normandy II" At this moment im thinking, Hell yes, but what doesnt make sense too me is why arent the kluth helping us or the UGTO just then an alarm sounded "Sir we got new contacts entering the system, it looks like a UGTO Battle Cruiser, A Station and an Interdictor SIR ITS THE GTN THEIR HERE TO HELP US!" "Sir 5 new Contacts Decloaking off the Port bow, Its Switchblade and the pirates Havox is with them they are helping us!" "2nd Rear Admiral GothThug this is Havox prepare yourselves we have a new weapon we're gonna try out on these Pirates" "Rgr that sir, Helm take us 500 GU away from that destroyer" ***6 Steller Incinerators Launch at the destroyer killing it instantly*** ((((((((((((Kaboooooooooooom)))))))))))) "wow impressive" "Thanx now they'll think twice before invading a system thats controlled by the best combat pilot ever!" "oh havox you make me blush" "sir theyre falling back" "good, do not follow, i think our ships have had enough for one day" But, this is just the beginning.
Too be continued
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HaVoX
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| Posted: 2006-03-16 11:00
Awsome, S|P to the rescue (with a assist from GTN)
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HaVoX
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| Posted: 2006-03-16 11:00
Awsome, S|P to the rescue (with a assist from GTN)
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| Posted: 2006-03-16 13:47
Havox, double post. Great stuff GotThug. You and Coeus. You two could write a DS novel, and sell it. Make more money for the game.
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GothThug {C?}
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| Posted: 2006-03-16 17:29
hey, atleast im trying, lol, you should see my 1st work of Fiction Darkspace I: The Phantom MIR 
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GothThug {C?}
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| Posted: 2006-03-16 20:53
This chapter is about Betrayal and Deception ***warning: Viewer Discretion is advised due too the fact im gonna put Graphic Violence on it***
Chapter 4: The Kluth Betray The ICC
After the invasion of Ross248 GothThug is very suspicious of why the shadow pirates came when they did, as GothThug himself was once Kluth they do not ally unless they can gain an advantage and with ICC forces spread through out the Metaverse it is only a Matter of Time before They strike where it hurts us the Most "Comm, Open hailing Frequences to The Kluth" "Rgr goth Hailing Frequencies open" "This is 2nd Rear Admiral GothThug Requesting that you state your intentions" "wow Goth its sure is nice to see you again" Havox said "we're just here under a flag of Truce under a mission of Peace" "very well" "Helm put us portside of the kluths Flagship the Black Pearl " The Black Pearl is the Kluth Siphon Flagship it carries 6 Infantry 8 Beams, and lots of other weaponry that i dont have time to mention. "Sir, Grand Admiral Switchblade has beamed aboard with his crew he wishes that you join him in the officers mess" "very well, i'll be there in a minute" ***in the officers mess*** "switch, it is agreeable to see you again, i hope we can remain allies in this time of war with the Pirates" "likewise, i'd like to introduce my crew, This is Fleet Admiral Havox, Admiral xtx of the Diligent, Fleet Admiral Neohermes, and Grand Admiral Zeritu of the KES, he'll be here watching our manuevers" "Alright then, well i have to get back to the bridge Commander Likkan, escort our guests back to the transporter" "yes sir" ***6 hours pass*** "2nd rear Admiral GothThug to the bridge" ***on the bridge*** "Sir" Taxi Says, "we are reading an enormous amount of neutron radiation" "from where?" "strangely enough it appears to emminating from us" "the soul taker?" ***just then 5 Torpedos hit the Black Pearl Underside Causing Critical damage to its Gravity Well Generators*** "OH MY GOD! this ship didnt fire those torpedos!" "open a channel to the planet anklo put scanners to full" ***2 more torpedos hit the underside this time taking out one of the engines*** ***2 People beam aboard the Black Pearl*** As they made their way through the cooridors of the ship they Cut up several kluth until they make it to the Grand Admirals Quarters, They shoot him several times revealing lots of green blood. "Sir, Grand Admiral Switchblade has been assassinated" "oh dear god they're gonna blame us" "Sir! they're coming about!" The siphons Torpedo bays light up blood red as they approach the missle cruiser at flank speed "signal our surrender" "sir"? "WE SURRENDER!" "Independence this is Soul Taker we surrender, i repeat we surrender" Just Then, 2 Piercers Decloak Pinning all ships within the jump radius "i shouldnt have said that, Open all hailing frequencies, "attention kluth vessels, we did not fire on the Black Pearl, we detected a Nuetron Radion surge, i think we have a ship that can fire while cloaked" "yes we know this" xtx says, "how do you know this?" "because our experimental cloaking device was stolen from a pirate ship hear sag hottha" "so now who's in charge of the fleet?" ***just then 6 Ships Come out of Jump 2 Ganglias 3 Drainers and 1 Colony Station*** "All Hands this is Coombie i am assuming command of our fleet until an investigation can be determined to find out who assassinated Switchblade, Fleet Admiral Havox is now in charge of the Black Pearl" "2nd Rear Admiral GothThug i am arresting you on acount of treason and betrayal to the alliance treaty of 2279"
To Be Continued
[ This Message was edited by: Fatal GothThug [R33] {C?} on 2006-03-16 22:50 ]
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HaVoX
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| Posted: 2006-03-16 21:06
Awsome I'm in charge, to bad switch had to go, but hey were luth crap like that happens all the time. Good work, looking forward to the next one.
@switch I run the pirates now YAAAR!! heh heh.
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GothThug {C?}
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| Posted: 2006-03-16 23:05
Chapter 5: Trial and Error
It has been 24 hours since the Black Pearl lost her captain to 2 unknown assailants and goththug gets blamed for it wow what a way to go. ***Sag Hothha Court Room*** Judge Evil Bob Presiding "2nd Rear Admiral GothThug you have been charged with 2 counts of Treason by the kluth Court of law, Firing on an Unarmored Siphon, and killing her captain how do you plead?" "not guilty your honor i was asleep when this happened" "very well, i have no choice, GothThug, i sentence you too life on the penal planet of Hell in Groombridge 34 There to spend the rest of your natural life!" ***judges gavel booms 3 times*** ***meanwhile back on exathra*** "Sir!" Fatal Command says, "i cannot allow another FS member to be abducted" "yes i know this" Chancellor Valerious says, "but im constraint on obeying intersteller law" ***meanwhile on Hell*** GothThug finds an Escape route, although, he is met with deadly force by a kluth guard of the highest rank in the Kluth Navy, Spiritlift of the Pitch Black shoves him in his Cell and says "stay put gothpug, you aint going no wheres" Just then an alarm sounded it was a transport ship in high orbit "wow" goth says to himself "they're here to rescue me" Just then The soldiers busted the cell door down only to reveal that it was Fatal Ants to the rescue with Melly and Taxi at his side. GothThug collapses as ants drugs him and takes him back on board the transport ship the defiant and takes him back to Tau Ceti for debreifing. High Counsel Member banshee asks Goth What Really Happened. "i dont know what happened I recorded an enourmous neutron Radiation surge" "wow" says banshee "it looks like we have a ship that can fire while cloaked" "i dont see how, the treaty states that all ships cannot fire when cloaked, now if their is a new weapon that is being made i dont know" "sir, we have enemy contacts bearing to port 2 siphons and a piercer" "oh great what have you done now Goththug other than be rescued" "nothing, except i love to snoop around hehe and someone told me in prison that theres someone in this fleet who is a spy" ***on board the piercer defiance*** "my lord we are in interdictor range" "turn it on do NOT let them escape" "Banshee, our jump drives are not functioning" "DAMN IT!" Little did they know that this traitor is on board one of the kluth vessels
to be continued
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| Posted: 2006-03-17 04:12
Chapter 6: The Beginning of the End: The Final Chapter
"sir, we have 3 Ion cannons charged and ready to be fired at the piercers" weapons officer said "Get ready to jump out of here on my mark" Banshee said "SIR! we have an incoming transmission from the station" "Grand Admiral banshee you are harboring a fugitive of the Kluth empire we demand his surrender or you'll be fired upon" Just then a Pirate Battle Cruiser Decloaked off the stations port bow and fired Phase Shifting Torpedos damaging the Weapons systems "what the hell!? Ganglias open fire on that Battle Cruiser!" ***battle cruiser cloaks gets behind one of the ganglias and takes out its Rear engines setting them ablaze*** "i dont think we can win this" "All hands this is grand admiral banshee get in your beacon cruisers and prepare to fire them at any place those torpedos are coming from got it!?! goththug i understand you have an Experimental Missle Cruiser?" "yes yes i do but its been impounded by kluth high command i cant get it unless someone wormholes me too Praetoria to get it" "Very well, get in a transport and i will wormhole you there myself" GothThug Runs to the shipyard and pulls out a Transport and banshee opens up a wormhole and gets too Procyon A but, after soon arriving he sees a bunch of pirates pilaging and killing innocent kluth women and children transports "oh my god i have to get pictures of this" ***digital camera gets shots of the carnage*** ***near praetoria a barren planet with no defense bases*** "oh my god, theres my ship" He gets in his ship with the digital camera and Jumps out" After arriving back at banshee's station he Gives the camera too him "i think yer not gonna like what you see on this, open hailing frequencies i need to tell the chanceller whats going on" "Chancellor coombie, procyon A is under heavy infiltration by the Pirates i have picture proof that i did not kill your grand admiral" Just then the same Pirate Battle Cruiser Decloaks Firing phase shifting photon torpedos but stays visible long enough for us to see who it is..it is Grand Admiral xtx of the diligent a Shadow pirate "SEE WHAT DID I TELL YOU! I DID NOT MURDER YOUR PRECIOUS KLUTH GRAND ADMIRAL! HIS OWN CLANMATE DID!" "all hands this is coombie OPEN FIRE ON THAT CRUISER!" 6 Steller incinerators went to the cruiser, beams and everything pounded that cruiser and ((((((Kaboooooooom)))))). "we got him" "no we didnt he's still there, he's cloaked but i can see his Plasma cloud" ***xtx Jumps out*** "Damn it! apparently he has an Anti-Interdictor aboard his ship" "no he doesnt sir, the interdictors were sabotaged" Said a voice from over the com "identify yourself son" said coombie "it is i, Fleet Admiral Snafu on board one of the Piercers, i believe it is safe to say, that im not a kluth anymore, i have joined the GTN and i was sent here to sabotage the Truce between our people the ICC and Kluth, im very sorry" "all hands, destroy that piercer" ***Piercer explodes killing snafu*** "heh, my god this is just a day of Traitorious scum eh goththug?" Coombie says Snidely reminding him of his days in Kluth "coombie, i dont need to be reminded that i was once one of you, i didnt betray you i got captured and this is my punishment for killing lots of ICC back in the day, so im sorry but enough of that we have to get to procyon A" They jump to procyon A only to find that xtx is there leading the invasions of Procyon 1355-55 and its moon, but 1 direct torpedo hit crippled its warp drive and engines and was a sitting duck "All hands this is coombie OPEN FIRE AND KILL HIM ONCE AND FOR ALL!" (((((KABOOOM))))))) The ship is destroyed and all the other pirates Self Destruct. "Sir this is GothThug we got a problem, i detect a presense aboard your vessel i need to come aboard so i can sort him out" ***on board the station*** "i believe xtx is on board this vessel i think he's bound to attempt...." They come across 2 bodies in the hallway. "Sir i found the uniforms with the kluth blood on them....oh my god, sir the uniforms belong to these 2 men Ramius and Barthezzz" Said Vice Admiral Crimson who found the uniforms in the Refuse. "not anymore, Phasers on stun at close range" Said the medical examiner ***XtX jumps out on goththug and trys to strangle him*** "you turd, i coulda gotten away if you'd just stay out of Kluth Affairs" GothThug Punches him and says, "i would, but im not that kind of guy, you see, prying into others affairs is what i do best, thats the primary reason why i was kicked out of my first fleet" gothThug takes out a Kluth_let from the closet of the infirmary. "Dodge this Punk" He Slices xtx's head off and he's killed instantly. "well, i'd say its time me and GothThug went underway" Banshee tells coombie "i agree too much drama for one day i'll see ya soon gothThug" "no you wont, unless you capture me again  ***goththug winks and walks off*** As the Line Station Endeavor leaves dock and warps out GothThug stares out the window of what once was called his home and wonders if what coombie said was true if he would get recaptured but thats another story entirely
The End
Coming soon Darkspace III: Return of the MIR
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GothThug {C?}
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| Posted: 2006-03-17 14:41
heh heh, come on guys, it took me 6 days to write this im slow when it comes to stories so bear with me
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| Posted: 2006-03-17 19:18
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