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Battle of CD Part 1! |
Fleet Admiral Busby
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Joined: October 15, 2004
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|  Posted: 2005-07-13 22:31
The battle of CD part 1.
as the trials of a thousand ships behind to orbit Filoth we await order from ICC high Command for new orders to attack the UGTO as tehy are tryign to invade CD. The ICC command assmbled a fleet of 3000 Ships to go against a fleet of 6000 it was all they can do in a short time. Admiral Evil lol : Midship open a comlink to ICC command. Comlink Open : Admiral Crimson: hello old freind looks like we meet again. Admiral Evil Lol : yes but iam afraid we got some problems The UGTO have got a foot hold in CD one of our Home systems have been captured and we need to take it back, but we are majorly out numberd. but we need a battle plan to make our numbers more usefull. Crimson : agreed . i say we line up our Missle Dreds and just pelt them but they most likely have Elite Assualt dreds so we need to put out Assault dreds infront to hold off those Ships . Evil Lol : yes i agree we are goan need masssive amoutns of forces but i think we can do it . i will contact ICC fleet command and Tell them our plan for our retake of the planet. 1 hour later..... Admiral Crimson they have agreed with your plan we attack in 1 hour.......... 1 hour lattter the Main ICC fleet has arrived and the eve of battle has just begun. Admiral Evil Lol : Midship make a whide fleet comucation Security Link 10 : ALl ships Raise sheilds and prepair to open Fire on my Command.
to be Continued
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Fleet Admiral Busby
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| Posted: 2005-07-13 22:36
edit tell meh what you think  )
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Deschain
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| Posted: 2005-07-13 22:43
I like a lot. Has a lot of potential. *nod* you could use some formatting though bro. It looks like it was written with Dragon Naturally Speaking with Christopher Walken doing the dictation. *smirk*
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